I know … I’ve been posting a lot of poems recently. π But it’s easy and fun and, honestly, I’m really excited to share them with you! They may not be masterpieces … but itΒ takes me an average of fifteen minutes to dash one up, and I really haven’t time for a longer post this today. π
Joy is like the sunshine
Dancing on the wind
It brings us warmth and laughter
And then itβs gone again.
~*~*~*~*~
And though the clouds may cover
And keep the light from view
We know above the tempest
The sky behind is blue.
Thanks for reading! Don’t forget to let me know what you think … I love comments! π
~Kellyn Roth
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Beautiful. Absolutey beautiful. π
Ps, I LOVE that pic of the clouds!! Its soo purty!!!! π
Ah, thanks! π
Ethan thinks you got that pic off of google….did you? π
No.
I got it off Pixabay. XD
Oh haha he was right! (surprise surprise!) π
Hey, he wasn’t right! He said “Google.” I got it off Pixabay. TOTALLY DIFFERENT! π π
BEST. POEM. YET.
Ah, I’m so touched! π
It rhymes, it has rythm, it makes sense, everything!!!!!!
π I’m getting more Amazing every day ….
Ooh, nice poem, and I love that picture! Did you take it yourself?
No, unfortunately. π I got it off Pixabay.com. XD
Hehe, that works too! π
Definitely! A lot easier, too! My weather here doesn’t always cooperate with the poems. I write a piece about sunshine … and it decides to rain …. π
Ah, crazy weather. I wrote a poem about weather and unpredictable weathermen reports a couple weeks ago. I thought about sharing it on my blog, but I haven’t decided whether or not I should yet.
It sounds interesting! Ah, weathermen. We usually just bet that what will happen weatherwise will be the exact opposite of what they say. π
Hehe, but when we predict the opposite of what they say, it actually ends up being what they predicted it to be.
Maybe I will post it…
I know what you mean. XD Do! I’d love to see it! π
I did decide to post it, because the poem still amuses me even after two weeks so there’s got to be some element of humor in there…
Yes, that’s a pretty good test for a poem … or anything you wrote. XD If you still like it after a certain amount of time, then obviously it’s got to be good. π
Hehe, yeah. Not sure if I like the style or all of the lines, but I really enjoy the overall concept of it, and I think posting it was a good idea.
Agreed! π
Oh! Gosh Kellyn! I really need to get back on track with my own poems. π
I like the part: ‘Joy is like the sunshine, dancing on the wind’
It described Joy so perfectly! thanks for sharing that Kellyn.
Thank you! π I’m really flattered.
Writing poetry is so much fun … at least for me. π